Really good way of expressing your emotions. The flow was good and the concept was great. But the word usage could've been a little better. All in all a great poem. Keep it up! :)

Wow, cute! haha :} I think this would've been fine in the love/romance category, but nevertheless a good poem. It's simple and sweet, the feeling it emits is just so amazing that i can't help but to smile :]

5/5