Woow, this is so powerful. And it is probably true that you never forget killing someone. Great job! I liked it.

OOo i have to say i was a little skepitcal about where this point was going but i love the ending. the poem itself was very mysterious and an enjoyable unique read. you clearly are skilled in reaching your audience.

.[Bow].

Thanks for read my recent poem. I know, everybody say the same, but that's ok for me.

Respect your poem -that poem-, I loved it, I tell you. Specially the rhythm that it's very attractive to read. Well, it exceeds tell you but I will: keep writing!

This poem is full of energy: the feelings land as should be.

Greetings.