Destroyed

by Beautiful Chaos   Sep 14, 2008


Rising, swelling
Waves of passion
Fiery, burning
Loss of ration

Eyes are turning
Blue to red
Time has stopped
Love is dead

Drink it down
My little swan
Lost and lonely
By the dawn

Wonder gone
A tortured mind
All that's left
For you to find

Ever reaching
Bound to crave
All you took
But never gave

Existing
In this mist of gloom
Cursed inside
This living tomb

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nee

    Absolutely wonderful..I love the shortness of the stanzas but still getting to the concept of the piece.
    reminds me of my current piece that I just wrote

    Okay so ::

    Eyes are turning
    Blue to red
    Time has stopped
    Love is dead
    Blue to red?? wow that sounded dark more than depression..very well-written stanza, my best out of the whole poem.

    Ever reaching
    Bound to crave
    All you took
    But never gave
    this one's reached the bottom of my heart, felt so guilty and greedy...I've always thought taking without giving is such an awful thing people do !!!

    I like this one too =]] I think I'm getting excited to reading more and more of your poems..I'm just addicted to poetry !
    Keep it upppp
    xx

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