Absolutely wonderful..I love the shortness of the stanzas but still getting to the concept of the piece.
reminds me of my current piece that I just wrote

Okay so ::

Eyes are turning
Blue to red
Time has stopped
Love is dead
Blue to red?? wow that sounded dark more than depression..very well-written stanza, my best out of the whole poem.

Ever reaching
Bound to crave
All you took
But never gave
this one's reached the bottom of my heart, felt so guilty and greedy...I've always thought taking without giving is such an awful thing people do !!!

I like this one too =]] I think I'm getting excited to reading more and more of your poems..I'm just addicted to poetry !
Keep it upppp
xx