There is so much power in your words, Paul.
I hope that all will turn out for the best for you and your little family:)
May she grow out to be a beautiful woman, your little peanut:)

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid

Aww bless...the ending is truly so beautiful!
lovely read. take care x

Interesting choice of style you have here and also it's full of meaning the last lines of the poem really summed up the whole thing because I think that is the part which holds the most meaning because it's about your daughter :) it's a very touching poem and although I cannot relate to it I can in a sense understand it. xxxxxxxx Great read,
xxxx Much love,
Roxy xxxxx

This poem is very well written. I like the style.in the beggining it showed so much pain and then as it got to the end it showed how one thing can make u happy. Very beautiful

Nice powerful words....good job