by Ingrid
This looks like a love poem written straight from the heart, Tabi:) |
by emovampire
This poem is very well written and touching gr8 job 5/5 |
I LOVE IT!!!!!! |
Wow. That was an amaizng poem. It's been a while since I have read something that good and so unique. It really did take my breath away. It was Beautiful. Kepp uo the great work. |
So this one is pretty much amazing. :) |
by angelface
I loved the last stanza .. |
by Whisper
Amazing! |
by FallingAngel
Amazing, great job. You did wonderful on the rhyming scheme and it was very heartfelt. It was a pleasure to read, your an amazing poet. 5/5 |
by Sumit Ojha
This poem was very touching, I understood what the you was saying. Though i'm a guy, i still feel that reassurance of love by someone you adore is a great key to an awesome relationship. (5/5) |
by Brittany C
Take the & out. They take away from the poem. |
Aww usually love poems are hard for most to do and that was great i hope u keep writing cause your like a natural good luck |
by Twistd StoRY
I lovee it! it was so cute, and romantic. it made me think of my signicficant other the whole time =] 5/5 |