Even though it looks rushed, this is a lovely tribute. It would be so easy to write something that just oozed sadness, but by introducing us to Bandit's personality and antics you've given us a much brighter and meaningful sentiment. I don't think there's anyone on here who hasn't lost a beloved pet that won't appreciate what you've got here.

I really like this, simply because of the subject the poem is about.

Many people don't realize how hard it is to lose a pet, some just think "oh it's just an animal what's the big deal" but for animal lovers and those who their pet is their best friend, it can be extremely devesating and you portray this well throughout the piece.

All that needs fixing in this is a couple of spelling errors.

Akwys ready to smile,

^^ Always

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^^Write