Unpredictable Love

by Sora   Sep 15, 2008


Kisses so soft,
A love so blind.
So little time it took,
For their emotions to intwinge.

Voices speak quietly,
Of their true dreams and fantasies.
As they tell each other everything,
All their feelings finally set free.

Wrapped in his strong arms,
She don't want to be in any other place.
And everyday, she waits impatiently,
To just see his beautiful face.

When the stars pour down,
And the color fades at the end of the sky,
Their futures are once again tied together,
Giving them wings to forever fly.

While each of their hearts,
Pound with more than a thousand words.
They share secrets to each other,
Not another soul has ever heard.

Pieces of days reflect their footsteps,
But nobody will understand.
Why she smiles for no reason,
As he reaches for her hand.

They walk along a path of shadows,
As the sun is shining and the sky is blue.
They think they'll be together forever,
Just like every fairy tale's suppose to.

Please comment and vote. thanks!

-Ashlei.

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  • 14 years ago

    by White Orchid

    I really thought this poem was good. I liked the whole story and how you developed it. It was almost as if at the end they didn't know they were going to be together or not, but they were enjoying the time they were spending with each other. Great piece!! :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Kuro

    Wow. reminds me of innocent Disney love. it seems so pure and right. very Romantic.

    Good job ^_^

  • 16 years ago

    by Cara

    This is so sweet.. everybody dreams of this.. a fairytale love :)
    i agree, the imagery was amazing.

    She don't want to be in any other place.
    ^^
    should be doesn't.

    :)
    other than that.. great.

  • 16 years ago

    by dora

    Wow, what a beautiful love poem. =) i really liked this poem. it was beautifully written, i loved this verse the most:

    "They walk along a path of shadows,
    As the sun is shining and the sky is blue.
    They think they'll be together forever,
    Just like every fairy tale's suppose to"

    it was really nice and loaving. great job, 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    Wowww...this is so descriptive and heartfelt...its very powerfull and the wording is just simply amazing....nice write. keep up the great work. 5/5

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