I think it's beautiful, very expressive, indeed. :) And that's what I loved about it. I felt like I was reading it through the poet's eyes... and maybe, that just makes it more beautiful. 5/5

The ending is so touching.
it is true... memories will always be there... no matter what.
i like how you talk about dreams and reality and just realizing that all can be mixed.

great job, hun. great length, good rhythm...
5/5

p.s.
thanks for my comment!!! :D

This is powerful, and very descriptive, which is great! I loved it. great work. keep it up. 5/5

Overall it's good. I appreciate your effort. It's a emotional poem. In some of the stanza lines are not that well constructed. I think you missed the imagery factor a bit. But as i said overall it's really enjoyable!

Wow, this poem is very true. I really like the message you're sending out-very meaningful and one that everyone can relate to.
A few spelling and grammar mistakes but nothing major.

5/5

Aish

I really loved this one. I felt as if I could connect with it somehow. It tugs at my heartstrings to know that I am not the only one that feels like that. Lovely, keep up the great writing.

I love your poem great work...

I thought your poem was really good, a very heartfelt piece. lot of emotion coming through. i thought ur ending was very powerful, i loved the way it ended. great job, 5/5.

A most enjoyable poem it was well written although watch out for spelling mistakes, it seems like a lovely heartfelt and reflective poem, something i like to write about as well.
Its good to look back at old memories and above all learn from them.
The past can be an excellent mentor
Well done

Grant

Wow.. what a deep and saddening poem. it kept me wanting to read till the end, which is great. the flow was good.
If tomarrow never comes,
^^
should be tomorrow.

i loved it overall..awesome work.