This Fool

Love this poem,, hate how we fall in love though and we would show the person the world and actually be their world, but they don't want to be a part of it :( nice work though!
P.S you ain't a fool, just in love :)

(comment #2) or maybe this isn't true? *just read your previous comments*

anywho, whether it is or not it's something i think a LOT of people can relate to.

sorry for commenting twice.

I'm really sorry that you've been hurt like this. this was a very emotional poem and you can tell that it came from the heart. anyone who is willing to hurt you doesn't deserve your love. but i guess our heart and mind aren't always on the same page are they? it takes time to get over things like this (obviously i can't say that i have the experience) but i've watched my father struggle through a similar situation and although he was heartbroken and felt betrayed, over time it hurt less and less and now he's happy and content on his own.

sorry if i don't make any sense. it's this insomnia! and really late at night. or should i say early? haha.

but really, you're truly a very talented writer.

Hey awesome poem shows love in the end it's really emotional (^_^)

I forgot how wonderful your poems are from not reading them in so long. I loved it, it was filled with so much emotion. It was just very well written.