by Erin
Wow, that sounds so fimiliar ...i dont know how you feel but i have onced got up and left ...for no reason at all |
Yes my friend sometimes one has to let go and move on to new and often better things in life, very well written Charles |
by J u l e s
I forgot how wonderful your poems are from not reading them in so long. I loved it, it was filled with so much emotion. It was just very well written. |
by Yeka
Hey awesome poem shows love in the end it's really emotional (^_^) |
by Jessica
I'm really sorry that you've been hurt like this. this was a very emotional poem and you can tell that it came from the heart. anyone who is willing to hurt you doesn't deserve your love. but i guess our heart and mind aren't always on the same page are they? it takes time to get over things like this (obviously i can't say that i have the experience) but i've watched my father struggle through a similar situation and although he was heartbroken and felt betrayed, over time it hurt less and less and now he's happy and content on his own. |
by Jessica
(comment #2) or maybe this isn't true? *just read your previous comments* |
Love this poem,, hate how we fall in love though and we would show the person the world and actually be their world, but they don't want to be a part of it :( nice work though! |