This is just about endings..i wrote it initially as the last poem for my collection...but it turned into something deeper.

Good poem. If I have any criticism, it would be that your lack of punctuation sometimes makes the ideas in this poem difficult to discern. Punctuation in poems certainly isn't mandatory, but it can aid poems by not only providing a guide to reading the poem out loud, but also by making the sentences make more sense. Also, in the last stanza, should the word "dawns" be used? Wouldn't that verb be conjugated as "dawn" in the you form? I'm not too sure about that actually... oh well, good poem.