Love strange

*Verry nice 5/5

This was a good poem. I could relate to it somewhat. The emotions kind of pop off the screen. Good job.

This is really good, I love the title. The poem portrays more emotions and flows pretty well, the line "My heart beats enlighten your name," didn't really make alot of sense to me, and didn't fit in the poem very good, in my opinion. I think it could be revised as something like "My heart beats to your name" or "My heart enlightens to your name"? also, in the last stanza the second line should be "That I swear everlastingly"?

Overall, great job! 4/5

:) this needs to be a song . love it , *sighs* I love love...or my bf or both. not sure . keep it up thx for taking time to read my poem

Beautiful write, the repitition accentuates the passion that you have portryed here, and what a wonderful job you've done, heartfelt indeed, even a dead souled heathen should be moved by your poem...very, very nice work.
john