I love the cute colloquial phrasing in this poem. Your use of the rhythm of your heart beats personifies love that speaks in tongues at many different levels. The perfect flow from your heart affords you any grammar errors, which is within poetic license. Any one pure of heart should envy the object of your affection.
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Beautiful write, the repitition accentuates the passion that you have portryed here, and what a wonderful job you've done, heartfelt indeed, even a dead souled heathen should be moved by your poem...very, very nice work.
john

:) this needs to be a song . love it , *sighs* I love love...or my bf or both. not sure . keep it up thx for taking time to read my poem

This is really good, I love the title. The poem portrays more emotions and flows pretty well, the line "My heart beats enlighten your name," didn't really make alot of sense to me, and didn't fit in the poem very good, in my opinion. I think it could be revised as something like "My heart beats to your name" or "My heart enlightens to your name"? also, in the last stanza the second line should be "That I swear everlastingly"?

Overall, great job! 4/5

This was a good poem. I could relate to it somewhat. The emotions kind of pop off the screen. Good job.

*Verry nice 5/5