Condemned Wood (Rhymed Double Etheree)

by Mr. Darcy   Sep 15, 2008


Condemned wood

Life
Breathes from
Acorn seeds,
Saplings transformed
To majestic trees.
Trunk turns branch, teeming leaves,
Hear Ye Forest's song on breeze.
.......Beneath vast, ancient canopies,
Thrive nature's wondered complexities.
A settlement of splendour..... guaranteed.

Suddenly, beauty is brought to its knees.
Proud Oak cries - Timber! Splintering dreams,
With chains of death, man wipes this scene.
Concrete pours on evergreen;
Sap screams - Rape! Ruined trees,
Black Woods smouldering
From man's disease.
Coppice breath,
Choked to
Death.

M. Moran 15.09.08 . 19.59

Etherees, consists of 10 lines, starting with 1 x syllable, through to 10 x syllables.

Double Etherees, then repeat this process, but in reverse, 10 x syllables, reducing to 1 syllable

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  • 16 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Man that must have been difficult to write and it was done so beautifully, i find this syle of poem interesting i think largely because of the difficulty factor , very well done Michael 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Michael,

    You used such beautiful words to portay your picture with:)
    It's always a joy to read your poems!

    Hugs,

    5/5 Ingrid