Completely Incomplete

The fire in the music
Burns behind your eyes
- the person you were trying to be has just killed you inside <

Just a suggestion, but you need to re-write the two last lines; and then your poem should sound better because its got so much significance throughout it and the last two lines kind of take away that.
but over-all nice work.

I don't know what to say about this one. i do like it though...5/5

Wow. i loved this! it was so different from anything i've read all day, and for awhile. i love the title it's quite eye catching. you got your message across well also. you chose your words wisley and it turned out perfectly. and the ending was great. job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.