Wow, Makalah, this is very very beautiful, you know that? I agree with you in every aspect. Why can't life be simple and peaceful? Why is there always someone making it a bad place... but that is, mostly because humans are prideful people. they believe they are right and when everyone has different opinions, I suppose that is when the world becomes dark.

this was a very magical poem...
the beginning was very pretty and light and then yougot the the truth towards the end.
very great writing.
i love this. :)
5/5