I loved this write, it started out sad, but then just got so much better. Your heart was broken, and then you found someone who could make you smile again and words just cannot explain how great he makes you feel. It's yet another beautiful write. I'm happy that something good came out of this, and that you are happy. I hope this is real and that you found the guy that is "perfect." :] 5/5.

"Please don't go, my heart is breaking slow".
I cried as you walked away and slammed the door."

In the first line, I feel like the second part of that could be reworded, it just seems unusual to read to me, but that's totally my opinion.

Good work with this poem, the style was very unique, and what I liked about this piece, was the rhyming and constant flow. Good emotions too, 5/5 from me. Keep writing, always and forever....