What If.
by Hologram Sep 16, 2008
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What if I was sad |
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15 years agoby Em
If the person you are writing this poem to is a real friend then they definately would, 5/5. Em
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15 years ago
by Cara
Well hun, it makes sense to me. its great. these are the question that everyone asks in their minds, about their friends, or sometimes even about themselves.
good flow, nice poem :) -
16 years ago
It makes sense to my interpretation. it's saying what if I allowed you to see my, the whole of me, and what if I told you everything that was on my mind, would you be there to listen, would you still be in my presence, would you accept me, would you just be there or just walk away, perhaps like the rest who have not bothered.
:) love your work. -
16 years ago
Your poem makes total sense.. It is what everyone wants to ask their friend but are to scared to do it.
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16 years ago
No; I wouldnt walk back in ..
.. Cause ii wouldn't leave you in the first place.
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