Comments : What If.

  • 16 years ago

    by Silent Suicide

    It Makes Sense To Me It Sounds Like Your Asking Someone Would They Still Be Your Friend Through And Through...But That My Thought 10/10 I Like It.:D

  • 16 years ago

    by FindingHarmonyInYurCries

    No; I wouldnt walk back in ..

    .. Cause ii wouldn't leave you in the first place.

    x0x

  • 16 years ago

    by DreaminThruTheDays

    Your poem makes total sense.. It is what everyone wants to ask their friend but are to scared to do it.

  • 16 years ago

    by DreamingOutLoud

    It makes sense to my interpretation. it's saying what if I allowed you to see my, the whole of me, and what if I told you everything that was on my mind, would you be there to listen, would you still be in my presence, would you accept me, would you just be there or just walk away, perhaps like the rest who have not bothered.
    :) love your work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Cara

    Well hun, it makes sense to me. its great. these are the question that everyone asks in their minds, about their friends, or sometimes even about themselves.
    good flow, nice poem :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Em

    If the person you are writing this poem to is a real friend then they definately would, 5/5. Em