WOW!! *screams* And you say I am better? What is this then??? This was totally AWESOME!!!! I loved it, the flow, and how you let us see every aspect of your life, it was wondeful! The rhythm was good to, but this poem was absolutely wonderful. It was real good to read, and I'm so sorry how this is for you, but it'll get better.

But this was just awesome!!!
xD

5/5

Wow.... i love how you talk about living somewhere... and the place where you must live.. it is horrible and upsetting.

sweetheart stay strong...
this is beautiful work.

5/5

Beautiful poem. When I was 17 my parents told me I was adopted and that my mother died while having me. for years I thought it to be my fault, but really it was all Gods big plan. I realized that if she were to live, I would have probably had a horrable life, so God worked it out in myFavor.Basically I am telling you that this poem was splendid. Keep up the great work.
Your Friend and Poet
Aaron.

Wow touching very much touhcing ,!!!! i had to read more then once , but very nice meaning , !!!1

great job

Wow, really beautiful.
Im so sorry about all the pain you must have felt, but this was still an excellent read.
Great flow.
Your really good.
5/5 for sure.
:)

Very touching poem. Very emotional write. Enjoyed it!

WOW. this poem took my breath away! it was simply beautiful. yet sad, but still beautiful. so touching, deep and filled with so many emotions. i've never read a poem such as this before, it was quite unique.it really touched me, and the flow was great. wonderful job well done. keep up the great work! 5/5.

-Ashlei.

:'(

Ouch...That poem has soo much emotion behind it that it actually hurts! This poem is beautiful! 5/5