Please comment on this. I wrote it in like 2 mins because I was bored and in a bad mood. It is an old form of writing for me and I'm not sure if it works for me. Please comment and vote. Thanks bunches
Look at us,
what is happening
All we do is fight
Is it me
or is it just you
Why cant we just be happy again
I remember those days
we said we'd never go out
5 months now together
We were happy
we did enjoy each other
now what is it
You know I love you
your touch
and your voice
When I am with you
my problems seem so far away
and I am happy
Why arent you happy with me
why cant you just understand
I am sick of this fighting`
Just let your problems go
talk to me, open up
and don't act like they don't bother you
Look at us
Tell me what is happening
Why is it that we fight???
