Awesome emotion, Love the fraze:" crushed by the sweetest lips I have never kissed" so beautiful :)

First of all...Congrats on the win! You truly deserved it. :] Sorry my comment is a little late...

When I first heard this lyric a few months ago, it truly inspired me and the emotion behind it blew me away. I listened to that song over and over because of that lyric...Your poem embodied the emotion I felt when I listened to that song. It was flawless. You truly made this lyric shine with your own creative twist on it. The flow was just flawless and nothing seemed forced or out of place...it was structure nicely...I applaud you!

Well done on this amazing piece. :]
*5/5*