This is the first Sestina I have read so I can safely say it is the best
I really cannot imagine how anyone could have done better, and I love this style. Your emotions not only came through, but you also created a work of art

Beautiful!

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I'm not very familiar with this style of poetry, but it was pretty good. I, for one, enjoy a poem with repetition like this, it almost becomes like a song as I read it. I liked how you were able to express so much using many of the same words. I can feel the emotions coming off the screen as I read it. Well done.

Will I get scared and hide my precious heart?
You have another chance to stop me from falling,
Should we just pretend that our hearts are close?
A simulation of the nature of our relationship,
But why are my feelings in this investigation?
One more chance to teach me how to love,

fav lines

I didn't like that you used the same words twice in each stanza. otherwise I loved your wording and structure of the poem. you could feel your emotion in it which makes it that much better :)
keep it up!

Oh yeah 5/5 :P

This is the 2nd piece of yours i have commented and rated on, and the second one lived up to the first, again i love Sestina poems. this poem was great,
Will I get scared and hide my precious heart?
You have another chance to stop me from falling,
my fave lines^^

this poem was great, loved the concept of it.

Oop's sorry forgot to mention 5/5

Hmm im so happy to read this kind of poems actually there are lots of words that i can truly relate, the whole words has a great dedication to me i love those kinds of thoughts its really true and very powerful message. its kinda filled with great words and great emotions that was all true, very excellent job. keep on writing all what u feel 5/5

The message was good and the images were well written but it had a stange aniliticle detachment. had an ora of more reseaching quality I had never seen. It worked well with this poem oddly enough. All and all I thought it was a n entertaining write Plot121