Left Behind

by donielle   Sep 16, 2008


Have you ever had this
Gut feeling that you
Left something Behind?
But you just don't know
What it is?
You sit there and think
Trying to see what you left
I know what I left behind
You
But i Didn't meant to
Now it's to latte
Somebody took you
Now im the one left behind

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  • 16 years ago

    by donielle

    Thank you very much

  • 16 years ago

    by Brad Quammen

    This was a nice read. I noticed a couple mistakes but not all things are perfect. In the stanza:
    "But i Didn't meant to
    Now it's to latte"

    The word "meant" should be 'mean' and the you mispelled 'late'. These were easy mistakes and a simple fix thus not altering my view of this poem. Very good 5/5

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