Love how it starts lol

Nice. Reads like song lyrics. :)

The poem speaks out to me. and I love it so! good job well done.

Hey loved the poem!! =) i gave it a 5/5!!!

People say there soul is cold and acid runs throw there veins but what i see is a man who has been hurt to many times to count and cant even relay on the friends around him. or maybe I'm wrong and there is someone there. i don't really know you so i cant say anything.. but what i have got from your poems is your heart is to hurt for you to show so you put up a mask so no one will see the hurt in side. but like i said that's just what i think.