Love it! I like the words, they're wonderful... the dedication in the beginning is confusing.

Wow this is terrific. There is a ton of emotion and there is a beautiful flow and such a strong word choice. I think this piece is beautifully written and I can't wait to go read more that you have written. The use of imagery in the piece is so stunning it is marvelous. magnificent job to you. I gave this a 5/5