Another excellent portrait of your heart.

It is refreshing to see a young person today so sure of herself and her God.

I like that you put this one into stanzas, although they are uneven, and the rhyme scheme is scattered.

There are way too many words in some places where you can say the same thing with abou half the words.

For example, you wrote:

I am a person with the freedom of choice
And I'm quite proud God gave me such a voice

Can be said:

Thankful for my freedom of choice
Proud of my God-given voice

Don't be afraid to edit your work. Write a poem, leave it for a day or two, then come back to it with fresh eyes and PLAN to cut it down some.

Keep up the good work!