I can relate to that awful feeling of waiting and hoping day in and day out when you have no control of the situation at all. It's best to just keep your mind busy and think positive thoughts everything will be okay :) Great job 5/5 GG23 p.s. I think that if you actually spell words the proper way it'll make your writing much better in appearance and sound. For example you say "cuz" in your last line, but I think it would be much better as because....great job though regardless :)

The only thing i would change is the last verse , the word cuz . It throws off the sad emotions brought on by the rest of the poem , which is overall really well written . I would never be able to imagine that pain if it weren't for seeing it through your eyes . 5/5