I was going to say, it sounds like a song.
but that would be why.

jesse...you're not going to drown. I won't let you, jesse..."I'm sorry I need you too much to let you escape".

*hugs you*

5/5

It really does sound like a song, and i love it! The rhyme scheme does not seem forced and there is a really good emotion....i felt sad after i read it! good job!