Wow, I'm really impressed
Don't let writer's block my dear,
write a song/poem about writers block!
It helped me :)

Very well done on this one too !!
I liked the last line a lot, I was like "why TODAY?" but now I find it really interesting :)
I love the shortness in your piece but still getting to the point.
I only have one small tiny criticism:
The rhyming words you used here are predictable, try to use new rhyming words, and don't push it too hard, just let it be musical and felt from the heart.
You know words with different endings do rhyme too, like "hard" & "part", "leave" & "me"
they do have music inside :)
that's the only criticism I have.
I want your rhythm to be better because you're a good writer and you have creative ideas in your head =]]

Best of luck xx