Aaaawwww im so sorry to hear that. but this is an amazing poem i must say. keep up the good work!

Truly sad. I used to worked in Neonatal Intensive Care Unit with premature infants, there's some moments this happens.

All my prayers~ his in peace with the Almighty.
A nice poem you wrote, dedicated to him.

This is very sad and I'm very sorry for your loss. The word choice was good though, it almost made me cry. A very touching tribute though. Keep up the good work.

This was very heart wrenching. It pulled at my gut. And at my eyes. Losing a child is a terrible thing. They never got a chance to live out their life. To experience the joys of love or happiness. The pain that comes with a still born child or a child that cannot live on its own is horrific. It kills a person of that I'm sure. Babies are the most precious thing for a husband and wife. Children make our world prosper. But so often now they die too early. I am sorry for your loss m'dear. It's a great loss and probably hard to cope with. But if you have the belief of heaven. Then you should know that your little Noah is with god and in perfect care. He's smiling down on you. Little sun rays of love are coming your way. You can be sure of that.
Beautifully sad piece.
Well penned.
Absolutely heartbreaking.
5/5

-Feignoctober