There is no point

by dontlookpassmytears   Sep 17, 2008


Pain is like an ocean
its deep and dark
and it will suck us all under

Love is like an thief
once you close your eyes
your heart will never beat anymore

Life is like the wind
swiftly it shall blow
but quickly it will stop

Hope is like words left unspoken
theres nothing for you to say
so what's the point anyways

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    This piece of work was quite creative. you expressed yourself very well, and got your message across perfectly. a great opening, and a great ending. i loved how you compared everything, it was unique. i don't think i've seen that in a poem before. you did an excellent job. keep it up! 5/5.

    -Ashlei.

More Poems By dontlookpassmytears