Comments : A beautiful white winter

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    I completely agree and you have captured the true beauty of the winter season. Great word choice, and throught this poem I could see in my mind everything that you were describing...

    "Clouds of icy breath fog the street,
    Pouring down cold slippery rain,
    Echoing down on me so sweet,
    Special little snowflakes, never the same,"

    Excellent rhyming, good work!
    Keep writing, always and forever...

  • 16 years ago

    by Mishka

    Makalah....
    your poems get better
    and better
    and better...
    and as ive said i LOVE nature poetry...
    this is just amazing.
    i love the winter as well, and i love how you portrayed winter as a bit mysterious and also...
    unknown to why you love it.

    very great!!!!
    5/5
    val

  • 16 years ago

    by ScarletHaze

    A brilliant poem 5/5 and u haves my vote =) x

  • 16 years ago

    by firexflys

    This was beautiful work. im not good at nature myself im just trying to get in to them. your is beautiful. 5.5

  • 16 years ago

    by Wereallbladesarntwe

    Beautifully written, more please xP

  • 16 years ago

    by HvN

    Wow beautiful you did so much better than I did in "winter's harmony" gosh i'm jealous!

    haha but wow!
    '
    5/5

    great descriptions, great ryme, beautiful poem!

    -HvN

  • 16 years ago

    by Jessie

    Great poem:)
    you should check out some of mine!:)

    cheers
    Maddi

  • 14 years ago

    by Sora

    Wow! this was absolutely beauitful. i loved it alot, i want to read it again! so pure and you kept the whole poem focused on the winter theme, wonderful. it wasn't out of place or anything, it was almost perfect! you kept the flow steady and every line just got better and better. you have a talent, please keep writing!

    Ash

  • 14 years ago

    by Lana

    This was a lovely poem with some beautiful imagery. Winter is also my favourite time of year. Enjoyed the read.