I like it a lot.......

There's a fine line between slang and trashy that you need to be mindful of.
Things that would help this poem;
NOT IT ALL IN CAPITALS. Capitals are for names and beginings of lines or sentences.
Words like "wut" is "what", wut isn't slang it's computer talk. Same with "ur" "u" "betta" "azz"

The fourth line means that she's a dope as bit.ch? What? "azz" sounds like "as" not "a.ss"

I'll give you an example of real (Aussie) slang;
"Throw another shrimp on the barbie!"
Put another saussage on the barbecue.

It's a little informal, but it's still spelt correctly.

Hopefully I've taught you something here,
jess ~