"But the anguish still remains from all your merciless deceit"
I like this line. It'd have to be my fav line from this.

Quite well written. I'd have to say though, feels kind of lacking (which might just be me craving for chocolate..) Nevertheless, good job. 5/5

Fav lines forsure

You stare at me with eyes so cold, so emotionless, so significantly apathetic
Your impassive, careless glower pierces me like daggers through my soul

this poem was like a bombshell :) I loved it, your choice of words, it was like I could feel the hate towards my ex beaming out of me by reading this :P . 5/5

"..so significantly apathetic.."
WOW..
not the best way to start a comment but WOW.. that should explain it.

there is SO much of emotion and angst packed into this. it can really be felt. which is a mark of damn good poetry.Great work,indeed.

the wording has been no less that excellent, to the point , and they deliver So well. i am in awe.

"..my I detest your very being and every single breath you take
Your eerie presence inflicts a shiver down my spine
I loathe the suffrage you've bestowed upon my heart
Your intentionally malicious hostility slowly tears me apart..
But with every piece that breaks, a change is taking place.."
-as i said before, so much emotion flows through this.. with so much energy and the angst is heartfelt.Superb!
AS painful as this piece is.
You have every right to be proud!
*30 thumbs up*
:P

~Wake~

Dude a lot of hate in the beggining which I don't blame you but in the ebd part "Reborn" Truly a strong word that no one will put you down...great poem

I haven't read anything new from you in a while but I am verrry glad I read this. :]

Wow. That just ble me away! I couldnt have read this poem at a better time because it was so easy for me to relate. The way you described everything was so heartbreakingly beautiful and the emotions felt so real! Sometimes you fall in a love so deep and with all your heart you believe it will work but then youre left alone with questions and shattered dreams. You expressed that feeling so honestly and with so much passion that I read it more then once because it was so good.

I could tell this came straight from you heart and am so glad to have read this masterpiece.

Well done.
*5/5* :]

I love how you write
its different.

Wow, there's really not much I can say about this poem other than it's amazing!! I love the emotion in here. And again, you're vocabulary is awesome. I love the wording in it. It flows very well. Excellent.

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