Story of My Life

Wow, this was good....the beginning reminded me of "twilight" with the whole heorin thing, but i like it...

"Being with me is the magic
leaving is the cold and dark"
^^ i think that is my fav.....haha

"And what is one person
but half a soul and love?"
^^thats deep, i like it...

"Dry, barely alive
kneeling before the queen
The light gone from the day
eclipsed by your own inner darkness"
^^very powerful ending. love it!

I love the way u started and ended it......good job!

Aly

"You are my heroin" <-- This dragged me into it from the start. Amazing. Good job.

This is awesome.. :)
there was something about it that made me really like it..
keep writing all these cool poems dude.
take care. Gb. :)

Great poem. i really liked this one. lol. keep up the good work and keep in touch. lates. ^_^