Comments : Story of My Life

  • 16 years ago

    by Cassie Cain

    Great poem. i really liked this one. lol. keep up the good work and keep in touch. lates. ^_^

  • 15 years ago

    by xX the left behind Xx

    This is awesome.. :)
    there was something about it that made me really like it..
    keep writing all these cool poems dude.
    take care. Gb. :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Katie

    "You are my heroin" <-- This dragged me into it from the start. Amazing. Good job.

  • 15 years ago

    by Unamed

    Wow, this was good....the beginning reminded me of "twilight" with the whole heorin thing, but i like it...

    "Being with me is the magic
    leaving is the cold and dark"
    ^^ i think that is my fav.....haha

    "And what is one person
    but half a soul and love?"
    ^^thats deep, i like it...

    "Dry, barely alive
    kneeling before the queen
    The light gone from the day
    eclipsed by your own inner darkness"
    ^^very powerful ending. love it!

    I love the way u started and ended it......good job!

    Aly