.....like?? likkee??? its beautiful. ilove nature poetry... nature is so simple... and so is this cute little poem. you nailed your first... i hope you write more:)

This is.. um.. really good.
xD

so simple and short, but it left me with a really good image..

niceee.

Gosh!! it simple and very short, but i had really captured what this poem trying to portrayed. though its short its really enjoyed to read, there are really different ways to write poetry and this one is kinda different and it tells something great and very expressive thought its such a short piece of poet,

the flow-- its really such simple
the rhymt- well though i cant see any rhyme still great
the emotions- was filled and very touchy even it was so short.
and most of that the message....

simple and totally very powerful 5/5

i enjoyed this piece alot 5/5