Comments : Saddened thoughts [[Nonet]]

  • 16 years ago

    by Mishka

    Crumbling downward... and you see this step going down in the form of the poem....
    this is brill...
    the way you write it
    the rain falls down, your thoughts are down, you are down....
    this poem is going down in syllables...
    and in line size and its perfect.
    i love it very much hun.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by slighte

    Fist nonet? seemed like your 100th. made perfect sense and the shape was right aswell. loved it. small and simple.
    5/5