There is no flow. You have some good rhyming lines in your stanzas but they are spread randomly. It would help if you had a pattern to your poem.

Aww..such a sad write.
To me a free verse is just as beautiful as a rhyming scheme. In poems such as these, it is the message that counts.
You were able to let the reader understand the pain you are going through. A very courageous write:)

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid

*tear**tear*. i love it. its so sad and so strong. when i read it i felt like i was the one writing it and that was exactley how i felt. love it. i can totally relate. love it. KM

This on stirred my emotions and empathy for those who have felt the agony of rejection