My Escape

by Sorinity   Sep 18, 2008


Escape through a blade,
forget me like I was never made!
You won't care or miss me,
I'll be gone tomorrow, then you'll see.
Ask anyone, they know you don't care,
only when it's right for you are you there.
This crap isn't fair to me,
this isn't how life's meant to be!
I had one person to live for,
no less and no more.
You're not here now,
so why do I stick around?

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  • 16 years ago

    by Shellaine shelli

    Oh darling, this was just so sad. it always saddesn me when people are left behind so filled with hurt and pain after the loss of the loved one, weather it is a death break up or what ever it may be it always hurts.

    i agree with NightmareChild that forced rhyming isn't always the best thing to do because poetry doesn't need to consist of rhymes its the emotions and feelings of truth that go into the poems which really count but never the less i still loved your poem. it was really strong and very powerful. great work and keep it up!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    I hope your solution to feelings of rejection is exaggerated, but I believe you made your point.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kimberley

    Awww. so sad. *tear*. love it. great ryhem (dont kno if i spelled that correct) and great flow. i can feel the emotion just pouring out of that poem. KM

  • 16 years ago

    by Krissymkitty

    Im sorry...very good poem tho...but if u ever want to talk im always open! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    You have portrayed your emotions very well, but the message is intensly sad. Why would you not want to live for yourself?

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid

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