Omgosh. I really love this piece. I feel this exact same wayy all the time. And I don't get it either! And I'm the type of person who hates to feel lost and confused. "/ This is actually how I've been feeling lately, quite often too, and I don't know how to make it go away.. |
This poem was really good with a great topic. Although the rhyming wasn't forced, it was a little cliche. And the flow was shaky at some points. But otherwise this poem was brilliant. Great word usage... keep it up! 5/5 |