Comments : Is this love? (maybe not)

  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    Omgosh. I really love this piece. I feel this exact same wayy all the time. And I don't get it either! And I'm the type of person who hates to feel lost and confused. "/ This is actually how I've been feeling lately, quite often too, and I don't know how to make it go away..

    "When I've got no wings yet trying to fly,"
    "For some unknown reason,
    I know seeing you will make my pain go away."

    I absolutely loved those lines. :] 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    This poem was really good with a great topic. Although the rhyming wasn't forced, it was a little cliche. And the flow was shaky at some points. But otherwise this poem was brilliant. Great word usage... keep it up! 5/5