Humbled

Deana
What a beautiful piece you have penned. The imagery is fantastic. You have painted a wonderful vision for the minds eye. The strength of love has such a powerful effect on our hearts. It is very humbling.
Excellent job!
Love Cindy

Deana,

My beautiful and faithful friend, I love all that you write. Your sincerity shines through all your verses. Now about your latest poem:

Humbled by its strength I cry
Beneath a majestic country sky
Lured by stars to view them all
Feel the night times magic call

^^^you captured the magic of the starlit sky at night within these words.

Sweet arms of love, can never lie
Humbled by its strength I cry
Soothing touch against my cheek
Melting lonely heart left weak

^^ The touch of a genuinly caring person can leave us humbled, this is indeed so:)

Passions raw emotions flow
Liquid fire within my soul
Humbled by its strength I cry
Imprisoned heart begins to fly

^^ When love sets your heart on fire, it can break through all the walls and bounderies you have built ( to protect yourself)

Road that led my heart to you
Weary traveler, journey through
A love too pure to compromise
Humbled by its strength I cry

^^It seemes so contradictory that love can make you cry..but they are tears of joy and of this immens feeling of relief to have finally found that one person who will love you with all of his heart:)

A beautiful verse, Deana. If I had been a mod here as well, I would have made you the winner of this week's contest:)

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

What a sweet poem, Deana. I love how you repeated "Humbled by its strength I cry" one line down each stanza. It was creative and subtle. And I always love the "imprisoned heart" phrase. I've used it myself actually. Not the same wording...but you get it. :) Great write!

Such beauty! Nice job, it's not a typical mushy love poem, it uses complex words and has great rhytmn.
Chin up,
Eleni