Sweet,
i like this one .. the flow was pretty damn good.
the start was beautiful, indeed.the words used were pretty simple and straight forward and thats what makes it so beautiful,i believe.
i love the 1st stanza whole.. not one thing i would change in it .. Amazing piece.

oh and did i mention the ending?? ..
its amazingly beautiful. i think i've said beautiful like .. 3-4 times now.. which might sound weird.. but its only because i feel this one IS purely a beautiful write!
it has love spilling out at the end of each line.
and it shows!
Great Work
Keep Writing !!! woo-hoo :D

~Wake~