Truly magnificent. Such a wonderfully worded poem. I felt a mix of anger and sorrow in this. I hope you're not hurting to badly.

Damn boy, you struck me so hard and so fine.
Broke my soul and innocence in such a short time.
Looking in the mirror to only revel in disgrace,
Within each eye only shines distaste.

^^^This was my favorite stanza. It really caught my attention. I love the way you wrote it, kinda like a story in a way. Wonderful, simply wonderful. KEEP IT UP!
5/5
yours truly,
~Forever Broken~

Truly magnificent. Such a wonderfully worded poem. I felt a mix of anger and sorrow in this. I hope you're not hurting to badly.

Damn boy, you struck me so hard and so fine.
Broke my soul and innocence in such a short time.
Looking in the mirror to only revel in disgrace,
Within each eye only shines distaste.

^^^This was my favorite stanza. It really caught my attention. I love the way you wrote it, kinda like a story in a way. Wonderful, simply wonderful. KEEP IT UP!
5/5
yours truly,
~Forever Broken~

Well.... ! well done.. keep it up

.....Rgds, Karan