Comments : Language of the heart

  • 16 years ago

    by Katie

    The rhyming to this story is very effective. I like it. Great job.
    And thanks for the comment. =]

  • 16 years ago

    by JaM

    I feel you have done a wonderful job with this write. The title is very interesting and definitely appropriate. I enjoyed the words you chose to use and I love the concept of the poem. It is very true and provides perspective on relationships and people. It is also very moving. Great work.

  • 14 years ago

    by StarryBlackNight

    Soul mates speak a common language of the heart,

    One of the best lines I've ever read. The poem is so beautiful and well written. It was really touching. Amazing :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    "However in the end it falls on you,
    To decipher all your lovers clues."
    yes yes and yes.....and...
    when it IS your soulmate..it is,
    indeed, a "collaboration"

    (by the way, in the last line, lovers needs an apostrophe: lover's...indicating possession of those sometimes random and
    always meaningful 'clues'...)