A Beautiful White Rose [Sestina]

by Beautiful Forever   Sep 18, 2008


I fell in love with a single white rose,
She's not a red one or a pink one,
A plain white that does not stand out,
Still she's managed to catch my attention,
So slowly, gently, and with a soft touch,
I've picked up this beautiful girl,

Such an amazing and kind-hearted girl,
Equal to that of the beauty of a rose,
Caring and so sensitive to my touch,
She has to be my one and only one,
Trapped and giving her all my attention,
And I have no intentions of bailing out,

Perspectives would say we're going out,
Whispers of the beauty of this amazing girl,
I never thought I would catch her attention,
Too tenacious like the smell of a rose,
Yet she has become my hearts only one,
A topic I will never allow us to touch,

But why do I shiver when I feel her touch?
All of my hearts feelings come rushing out,
How could she possibly be my only one?
A smart, funny, kind, and loving girl,
Is there a penalty for me picking this rose?
The risk of losing more than just her attention,

But I don't want to ever lose her attention,
Having her hold me with the softest touch,
Smelling her scent as intoxicating as a rose,
Lending my shoulder when her tears come out,
Staring at her as though she's the only girl,
Because I pray she will forever be my only one,

I will let my heart follow only this one,
Caring for her heart with sincere attention,
She still has the soul of a loving girl,
Lost inside a soft yet caring touch,
So forbid my mind from ever blacking out,
As you shine the beauty of a white rose,

Please let this girl choose me as her only one,
Using the disguise of a rose to hold my attention,
Just one soft touch - my heart has no way out...

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I wrote this for my girlfriend Kaitlin. Today is her birthday... so I wanted to give it to her as a gift. I hope my feelings shine through... [September 18, 2008]

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  • 16 years ago

    by jordan

    OMG!, this poem is beautiful. i made my boyfriend read this poem. we both agree that love is a white rose. i hope taht your girlfriend love that poem.

    i have a love peom about a red rose.

  • 16 years ago

    by trist3sa

    Wow, thats beautiful

  • 16 years ago

    by Mohamed

    Wow...Dude i must say that was one of the most amazing poems that i've ever read....i just like how u express ur love into a words that gets peoples Attention and sure she is just a lucky gurl too my freind...well keep it up the good work
    much luv
    -Moha...

  • 16 years ago

    by Curing the Comon Cliche

    Awwww, that was amazing. She will love it, girls melt for poems like this. Good luck with her you care for her a lot. Great flow and imagery, it all seemed to be in there quite seamlessly.

  • 16 years ago

    by Robert

    This was a great devotional poem the images were very wellplayed out the flow was good and you seemed to keep the reader from begining to end Plot121