Yes they always seam too. Nice flow and imagery.

What imagery you have created in this great write. Fantastic in every way. Great flow and structure.

You wrote this in such a way, I could almost feel the flames, Grant!

How terrifying it must have been for you and your family!

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid

This was truely amazing.
We get pretty bad bush fires where i live.. but they dont really compare to the ones that you wrote about. I cant seem to get the image out of my mind.. raging fires.. looks of horror..
You wrote it soo well.. its gonna stick with me for a long time.
awesome work.
5/5