by Ingrid Sep 18, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
sensual love
Baby, I am so cold |
Again a very nice warm and sensual poem, you come through with a lot of wanting and need in this poem, even a sense of longing? |
by Mizuki
I like this very muchs! |
by Sorinity
Wonderful job! i love the abc rhyming pattern, not seen very much. great to see a poet go somewhere new :D cant wait to read more, keep it up |
Very good poem! : ) |
by Blueleo
Very nice poems, very passionate. It was hot and spicy, yet tender and soft. My heart was lost between comfort and being turned on lol. An exciting read indeed. |